Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Writing Descriptive Details

In order to make our personal narratives stronger, we have been talking in class about adding descriptive details to our writing. Descriptive details include:
  • Adjectives (words that describe, like enormous, green, freezing, outstanding, etc.
  • Interesting verbs (powerful action words, like sprinted, leaped, rushed, twirled, etc.
  • Telling the "who" - who was there with you?
  • Telling the "where" - where were you?
  • Telling the "why" - why did events happen the way they did?

Let's focus on adjectives in this post. What adjectives could you use to describe the Issaquah Salmon Hatchery? Use the photos below to give you ideas. List as many adjectives as you can think of in the comments!


What colors do you see?


What textures do you see?


What shapes do you see?


What temperatures do you imagine?

36 comments:

Anonymous said...

frothy
green
white
cold

-Mrs. Lee

Anonymous said...

Cool
fast-flowing water
dark
poluted
enourmous
battered
wet

Anonymous said...

dark
peaceful
calm
black
humungous

Claire

Anonymous said...

slippery
colorful
wet

keerthi

Anonymous said...

wet,blue, clean, silver,light,brown
zoe

Anonymous said...

frosty'cold'cool'awesome'wu-wu this is coo-coo coll kool pool.

Anonymous said...

dark
bubbley
stairlike
frothey
cold
black

Anna

Anonymous said...

Quinn did this.

Anonymous said...

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo we cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

Anonymous said...

wriply, earthy colored, slimy, violont.



liam

Anonymous said...

flowing

Anna

Anonymous said...

clear water
wet
fresh




Prada

Anonymous said...

clear water
wet
fresh




Prada

Anonymous said...

freezing

Brown

slippry

big



Rachel L

Anonymous said...

wavy
colorful
rocky
splashing


-Olivia D.

Anonymous said...

shallow
hard
rocky
blue

Elliot

Anonymous said...

wavey
foggy
shallow
hard
water going down hard



-Faith

Anonymous said...

Very fast flowing water -Ethan

Anonymous said...

wet

gooey

slimey



Rachel M

Anonymous said...

cold
black
gray
white


Avinash

Anonymous said...

Dark
Fast-Flowing Water
Cool
Calm
Huge
Battered
Tired
Wet

- Eric

Anonymous said...

Black,
Earthy colored,
Shimery,
cold,

Anonymous said...

Collerfull,gloomy,grey,squeky,clean.GRANT

Anonymous said...

slippery
fresh
frezzing
shining
zoe

Anonymous said...

all about you





rachel m

Anonymous said...

Colorful
Brown
Ripply
Fresh
smooth
round

Anonymous said...

black
wavey
foggy
brown
freezing Sam
blue
clear
big
slimey
scaley
wet

Anonymous said...

cloudy
barkey
dirty
stickey

keerthi

Anonymous said...

pretty
colerful
wet
nice
beautiful
stinky

katelyn

Anonymous said...

upper one by olivia w.

Anonymous said...

fresh





Prada

Anonymous said...

Clean
Green
wet
slippery
Qiuet
brown

By:Graziel

Anonymous said...

Clean
Green
wet
slippery
Qiuet
brown

By:Graziel

Anonymous said...

cool
clear
rippling
wet
calm
rocky
green
brown
white
dirty
fresh
watery
blue
pretty
warm
cloudy
humid
fungis
packed
croweded
quiet
slippery

-Anna

Anonymous said...

i lik it

Anonymous said...

I like it was the one thaton top of me.