Monday, March 23, 2009

Creating our Thesis Statements

Writers, today you tested your possible thesis statements by asking these questions:

  1. Is this an arguable statement, rather than a fact?
  2. Is this statement true for the beginning and the end of the story?
  3. Can I support this statement with evidence from the text?

My thesis statement is:

Gabriel is a lonely boy who lets a kitten into his life and then isn't lonely anymore.

What are some of your thesis statements?

Feel free to comment on the thesis statements of others as well!

Friday, March 13, 2009

Just For Fun...


Mrs. Perry showed me this fun website where you can turn photos into shape collages. Just for fun, I turned photos from our October Author Celebration into a collage. Click on it to enlarge. What do you think, writers? :)

Thursday, March 5, 2009

Cooperative Strip Paragraphs

Cooperative Strip Paragraph is a GLAD strategy that our class uses when writing expository text about a unit we are studying. As a class, we create a Process Grid, a graphic organizer that sorts information about our general topic (Native American tribes of the PNW) into categories (Location, Social Life, etc.)

Here is the Process Grid we created for this unit (click to enlarge):


Next, we use information from the Process Grid to create sentences that can be grouped into a paragraph. We do this as a class first, with each table group creating one sentence to contribute to the class paragraph (the Cooperative Strip Paragraph). As a class we then revise and edit our paragraph, until it is perfect.

Here is the Cooperative Strip Paragraph we created:



Our final step in this unit was for each table group to create their own Cooperative Strip Paragraph, using the exact same process on a group scale.

Here is the blue table group's paragraph:


Some students took on an additional challenge and created individual paragraphs using this process. In fourth grade, students learn to create several paragraphs in this way and eventually write five-paragraph essays about what they are studying!

Elias' Story

This is Elias' fiction story, The Joe Story. As you read it, look especially for Elias' word choice and use of dialogue. What has he done that you could do as a writer?
(You can click on each page to make it larger)