Thursday, March 5, 2009

Elias' Story

This is Elias' fiction story, The Joe Story. As you read it, look especially for Elias' word choice and use of dialogue. What has he done that you could do as a writer?
(You can click on each page to make it larger)


11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thanks alot for posting my story Mrs.Lee!




-Elias

Anonymous said...

Thanks alot for posting my story Mrs.Lee!




-Elias

Anonymous said...

Wow, Elias has a good story!




-Joe A.K.A Elias

Anonymous said...

A comment to Elias:That's a great story!



-Maria

Anonymous said...

that was very good Elias



- mitchell

Anonymous said...

thanks micthell.




-Elias

Anonymous said...

Elias your story is funny and good






-Aleya

Elias said...

Thanks Aleya!

Madison said...

Nice Elias!!!!!




-Madison

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-Elias

ELIAS said...

it wasn't so hard to make this story. All you have to do is think about what you mostly write about.

[tip]: When to got a starter, write your ideas instead of thinking about your plans.


Just go with the flo guys!!