Kaitlin would like compliments and suggestions for her story, below. This story is only a draft.
Demi's Concert
One day I went to Demi Lovato's concert. "I had front row seats," I said. "When I walked in, it was so crowded." I walked to the line for t-shirts. I waited in line for 45 minutes. Then finally I got my t-shirt. Then we went and took our seats. "First David Archuleta came out," and sang 5 songs! Then Demi Lovato came out! She sang my two favorite songs, "This is Real, This is Me" and "Here We Go Again," and much, much more! "She rocked!" I said. When the concert was over it was very late and I was very tired. When I got home my dad put me to bed and said, "Did you have a good night?" I smiled and went to bed.
Please leave suggestions and compliments in the comments for Kaitlin!
The Bunny (a poem)
11 years ago
19 comments:
I licked how you said your favorite songs
henry
kaitlin i love your story!
from,kaitlin
its fadeles
kaitlin
Your so lucky I wish I could of been with you! I went to the taylor swift concert too!
I bet you liked the concert so
much!
- Siddharth
I like Demi Lavado too!
- malia
I bet that was fun!
the 7th comment was Noah
Was the concert fun?-Art
I love Demi Lavoto! Your so lucky! -Amanda
What were your favorite songs?
-diego
I like your story sophia
What songs did david sing?
-diego
Your so lucky I wish I was with you! I went to the Taylor swift concert too!
kayla
To Kaitlin
Kaitlin I like how you put many dilaoge,actions and setings.
-sumin
The ellevnth comment was a typo.
-diego
I wish I could be with you!!!!!!
CASSIDY
I love David Archuleta songs!
was it a little scary in front row?
I would be scared in front row.
Was it really fun?
Dear,Katlin
Did you like that book,because you wrote alot about it!
-ZACH
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