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- Read any comments that continue the story carefully.
- Add a piece of the story in the comments. Your part of the story must make sense with everything that has come before.
- Don't end the story until everyone has had a chance to add!
"Ah-choo!" I couldn't stop sneezing! The basement was dark and dusty, but I was determined to get it all cleaned out over my midwinter break. I was pulling some moldy old boxes out of a corner when my hand brushed something smooth and cool. I gripped the hard object and tugged. It was a bottle, but it looked old and I didn't remember ever seeing it before. It was blue with swirls of purple, and had a cork stopper in the top. It was just as dusty as the boxes I found it behind, so I tried to polish it off a little with the edge of my shirt. Suddenly, the cork popped out and a genie appeared in front of me! Then...
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... He asked,"I will grant you three wishes. What will they be?"
The blog on top is Deon's blog.
"What will be your first wish"
The one above is Mitchell's.
"I wish my basement was cleaned right away" I said.
-Deon
"At your service, Master. Your wish will be granted."The genie said. Suddenly a giant cloud appered, and the basement was cleaned and organized. Then the genie said, in a loud voice,"you have two more wishes left, use them wisely." As soon as he said that, he dissapered back into his bottle.
-Deon
"Hmmmmm, what should be my next wish." the boy said.
-Elias
I wish i had a hores.
-brianna
Suddenly, a giant wind blew, and when I went to look outside, I saw a beautiful, brown horse.
-Deon
Your wish will be granted. You still have 1 more. What will it be?
Anna
I really have to think about my last wish what should I wish next?
-Aleya
Then, the genie dissapeared into the darkness.
cole
I wish I have tomagach v4.
byakari
I said. The genie poped out of the bottle again and said loudly,"Your wish is my command. Now look outside." I ran out the house in a rush of excitment. I would have a horse! ...
-Maria
I wish he would come out of the bottele now you have 0 wish left. -Drake
"I wish for 5 more wishes!"
-Madison
Puff! There in front of me was the most beautiful horse I had ever seen!
-Emma
I wish I had a motercycle.poof.A red motercycle appears in front of him. -mitchell
I do not have a basement and mabe Johna put it there and not the one in our class room.
Elijah
"I wish that I had more genies"
"I wish that I had more genies"
what should my next wish be, I thought to myself.
-Baylee
what should my next wish be, I thought to myself.
-Baylee
a zoo and with all the animals and that will be all the end elijah
LOL... that's a pretty abrupt ending, Elijah!
Do any of our main character's wishes have negative, unseen consequences? For example, maybe the zoo is too much for the main character to keep up with, and pretty soon the animals are dirty and hungry and unhappy! Great stories always have a few twists and complications... any ideas, anyone?
-Mrs. Lee
hey Mrs.Lee, how about you make up another story starter and we can make one that is a bit better. Im not trying to be mean guys.
i found another giene bottle irubbed it. _brianna
I don't get it...
-Elias
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